Ralix's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[cool kalculator!!11!1]

Wow, a free calculator with no ads! Bookmarking immediately!

It's a calculator, we've all seen one, so I'll just list some observations:

– Dividing by zero gives you Infinity, and 0/0 is NaN. Wow, impressive. You should probably have a syntax error, too, if you enter no numbers at all and just the operand, it still gives you the result.
– Having no operand and just a number should give you the same number (now it does nothing)
– Entering decimal numbers is broken
– There's some weird spacing when entering subtraction and division
– There's no way to enter negative numbers
– If you get a result, and press an operation, it should use the result as the first argument. That way, you could get around the absence of parentheses and the inability to enter multiple operands, now you can't, so you can only perform a simple calculation

Edit:
Updated the rating; most things were fixed and I also noticed it works on mobile, so that's pretty cool.

EuropeanRat responds:

Im done with the most of them now, but 4 cant be fixed. Thats a problem in the programming language, not the code. Edit: It can work on mobile, but emm, you would need a fast one since i tested it on a phone, we dont talk about speed and lag right? Okay then nevermind

[Ducksplosion]

It's a neat little game and a cool idea, but it's over too quickly (but I can see more levels are coming soon).

I felt everything is maybe too close together, making the screen seem a bit cluttered, giving the duck less space to manoeuvre. Perhaps try zooming out (and speeding up the rockets to compensate), it would also open you more options for new enemies for the future levels.

The difficulty scales up well in the three available levels. The rockets are homed in on the player (good, otherwise you could probably hide near the edges to avoid everything), but it also makes the screen edge very important, as the ultimate tactic is to lure everything to one side of the screen, and then flip over to the other where you have free rein. The other tactic is to destroy everything before they shoot too many rockets.

Perhaps the rockets could turn towards the duck?

There is no sound whatsoever, which hurts the enjoyability somewhat.

If you get killed after winning before, it relocks the Levels menu. This probably shouldn't happen.

The Newgrounds resolution doesn't match the Unity game resolution (+32 for the bottom panel), which adds a huge, unused black rim around the game. The “Back to Title” button in Levels and Credits also isn't anchored properly to the screen border, so it is cut off slightly until you go fullscreen.

I like that you can play with the duck in the main menu and it loops around as well. I wanted to say perhaps the duck could be visible on both sides of the screen while it's halfway through, and while moving it very slowly, I noticed it does happen – for a single frame or so. Also, the duck becomes half-transparent and disappears when the screen loses focus, so now I'm not sure if it's intentional. Either way, you will never notice a single frame during gameplay while moving fast, and all those frames when you can only see half of the duck don't have the same transition effect.
So if you would like the players to notice it, add it to the other transition frames as well.

An important rule of pixel art is also to make sure all pixels are of the same size, i.e. you don't mix different sizes in different objects. It's not as noticeable here, but looking at the main menu, the grass definitely has larger pixels than the duck.

Winning should also probably do something more interesting than just kicking you back to the main menu.

PikaconYT responds:

Wow ty for taking your time to write this and leaving feedback. I will start to improve on the suff you have said. ty again.

[Lupa]

It's a pretty okay game, and certainly a better version of the original Lupa, if I remember it well. There's a clear goal, a timer, gradual difficulty increase.
And since it seems you'll still be adding new things and improvements judging by the main menu (version 0.1, shop coming soon), it'll get even better. Well done!

As for things you might want to consider:

– Interactive gameplay elements should be distinguishable from the background. Here it sort of blends in. I'd try making the coin and rockets shine more, or have an outline. Before I went fullscreen, my first thought was “a little shark”, not a rocket.

– The player is visible well enough since nothing else is white, although using a plain cube might feel placeholder-ish. Perhaps think about visual style you want to go for, i.e. overall art direction. A fenced grass area evokes a farm or a suburban house, white blocks evoke a heavily stylized game, and rockets warfare or technology. All together, they don't exactly match.

– Regarding jumping, it would be helpful if the cube had a shadow directly underneath, so you can accurately judge your height and tell where you'll land.

– The absence of any sound effects hurts your 'game feel'. You could make picking a coin feel much better if there was a little jingle, perhaps a mild screen shake.
The same goes for a rocket hitting you; now it simply resets the game without much else (e.g. death effect, showing you your coin/score total etc.).

– The game is shown in perspective, but you're not utilizing the perspective for gameplay yet (e.g. by having obstacles, or anything where things can get behind each other). But it makes coins in front harder to see (since you're viewing them from almost the top), and things in the back appear smaller.

– It's always a gamble to go near the edges, as a rocket can spawn anywhere instantly and you can't tell where, so you're betting on being lucky enough for the moment you need to be there. Some games deal with this by showing arrows near the edges a few moments before the spawn happens, or by spawning missiles further from your playable area, so you have always have time to react.

– You can hide the 'Exit' button in a WebGL game, pressing 'Exit' will simply freeze the game until you refresh the page, which seems like a bug, and it's unnecessary to be able to quit a web game when all you need to do is close the entire tab.

– If you use the 'Default' Unity template which adds the bottom fullscreen bar, you need to add +32 to the vertical resolution here on Newgrounds, otherwise, it gets cut off.

– The “Shop” in the main menu hints that you'll perhaps be able to purchase upgrades and other items with collected coins, which would definitely be a huge plus. After that, I wonder what the end goal of the game is supposed to be.
Is it complete X levels? Collect X coins in total? Beat your best score? Make sure the shop items tie into it and help you “get better at it”.

– Also to help you attract more players; one almost guaranteed way to do so is to introduce medals and scoreboards to your game. Medals also help you show what the goal of the game is (there are many players who hunt down games with medals to unlock them all), and scoreboards will give you a simple way to record the best score of players, and have them compete with each other (to some small extent).
See here: https://github.com/PsychoGoldfishNG/NewgroundsIO-Unity

So congratulations on releasing the remastered version, it *is* a pretty big improvement over the original and I hope you'll really get to add the things you wish; so that eventually, we will see the version 1.0 you envision.

Elooke responds:

the shop is working

[Potatype [The AI Game]]

The models are great and look fun. It's my first time seeing a vegetable ship or a broccoli horse.

The dance battle aspect is not something I find enjoyable, there's just not a lot of fun in “smash as many keys as fast as possible”, especially if you need to do it for a while, and with all characters.
I suppose it would be more interesting if there was e.g. some pattern to follow, or another gimmick in the fight you can learn to do “well” and perfect with skill or experience.

But I admit I was most curious about the AI dialogue.
Kudos for implementing it, it's impressive. I was mainly trying to find out how well it works – e.g. if all the characters have a unique personality and how well they react when asked about the world and situation they're in.

The Chill Tomato is aware it's a tomato (good) – even when asked for its Latin name, says it's chill and chilling at *every* damn opportunity, and the dialogue looks like it would match its personality (“hey bro”, “I legit laughed hard”).
I told it I'm a tomato (“glad to have you join our ranks :)”), asked for my middle name (“Tater Mash”) and then full name – which seems to be “Potato Tater Mash Tomato”. Nice.

The problem is trying to get anything of substance out of it. Asking what the goal of the game is (or what I should be doing) gives you a very emotionless speech about finding happiness in life and making every day count.
Asking about other characters to beat gives you a list of various vegetable gangs, asking about other *tomatoes* to have a dance battle with gives you a list of made-up tomatoes, none of which are actually in the game. “What's your greatest fear?” gives you a philosophy essay about losing loved ones and being forgotten and I get no interesting reaction when I reply my favourite meal is a tomato. I feel it says “I see what you did there” or “I laughed hard” whenever it has trouble coming up with an answer.

But I'm impressed that I asked Redbeard about the name of his vessel (Scarlet Scallywag), and if he wants to change its name – he agreed and came up with Red Rogue, and correctly referred to the ship as such when asked later. Oh, and he says “we be sailing through stormy seas” when asked about the weather. But it might just be him losing his marbles.

So I think it's a very impressive gimmick to play with for a while, but it mostly gives you unique random banter, as long as your questions stay on topic with the character you're talking to.
The characters might benefit from an expanded shared set of instructions that tie them together, e.g. what are the other characters, what the world around is like, what are you all doing here, what the player should be doing etc.
I wonder what it would look like if you had to question the AI about a potential crucial piece of information you need to progress in the game. I imagine it would be either very easy or very hard depending on the line of questioning used.

I think I encountered a bug that stopped the “Thinking” label from appearing, so the game always looked stuck for a while after clicking on “Speak”. And the fact that characters repeat their last line when you talk to them later also doesn't seem quite right.

All in all, it's amazing what you managed to put together within the scope of a short game jam, and I've been curious to try a game that utilizes AI dialogue for a while, but beyond this simulation aspect, I don't think I would have a lot of fun playing the game in its current state for long.
But for a while, it's very interesting to be able to explore every little conversational cul-de-sac you can come up with despite the sometimes mixed results.

Luckythespacecat responds:

Thanks yeah, it was hard since I only had a week to do it. But I'm excited to see the results. It was definitely more of a expirement about the AI dialogue then a game by itself.

[BlockJump (UNFINISHED)]

This platformer unfortunately breaks apart two seconds in, because the camera doesn't catch up with the player.
So you get across the first two platforms and then you have to move outside the screen boundaries and guess where to jump… which will either get you killed instantly or you get lucky.

Either way, it's not a fun gameplay.

ScuffedGames responds:

Thanks for the feedback I might fix and redo the game tho :(

[Defeat The White Mushroom]

It's a pretty straightforward game in which you can only employ one single tactic if you want to win – move to the opposite side of the screen out of the range of the fire breath and keep shooting until the “mushroom” jumps into your wall of bullets. Given your limited moveset, no room for mistakes and the unchanging attack pattern of the enemy, anything else will get you killed.

To improve the game, it'd be nice if the enemy sometimes did something different (especially as its health decreases) – but if it made the game significantly more difficult, you'd probably have to give the player lives, so it's not just a one-hit kill. And possibly allow jumping to allow for some added complexity in the attack patterns.

But as a simple game you play, win, and forget (or as an early-game boss in a larger project), this concept works fine.

[the duck game]

It's almost perfect… except it's a bit short.

The movement and platforming are amazing and fluent, the mechanic about traversing through the edges of the screen is cool, and the quacking when you die is pretty funny.

I wanted to talk about how you're taught about the screen-edge traversal in the first two levels and then it's not used in a while… but it's used in the final stages again, so that's a moot point. I may feel the key's hitbox is a bit too small (there's a level where you walk underneath the key without collecting it even though you're almost touching it) – but that's a really minor detail.

So overall, it's an impressive little game that is unfortunately over just as you feel things are starting to pick up.

[Sluggerz 2.0]

It's a pretty cool shooter. 3D, several stages, multiple power-ups and a boss battle. And one of the most epic Credits sequences I have ever seen.

Although considering it's the core of the gameplay, I'd expect to enjoy the shooting more… but it's fairly bland. I can barely tell I successfully shot someone. The torso very briefly blinks red if you hit it, but I'm not sure if any other body part does the same… or if there's a difference in damage between shooting other body parts.
But mainly I’d try looking for ways to improve the main feel; gunplay (for inspiration – https://youtu.be/SWf9pNdivpo) and add impacts to affected body parts, temporary stun animation or some better visual indication (for inspiration – https://gamedevacademy.org/game-feel-tutorial/).
Otherwise, it's always such a surprise when you click a few times to seemingly no effect and then the enemy drops dead.

Other notes
– Default Unity buttons in the Menu; they're pretty recognizable for bad reasons – they don't look too good on purpose so people would be more inclined to replace them
– You can hide Quit button in WebGL games, it's pointless as it just freezes the game forever until you refresh the page
– I'm not sure what the menu background is supposed to be (blurry texture, overlapping models, different grass texture scale); but it certainly isn't very representative of the actual game (it should ideally make players excited to play it; for example you could show some enemies posing with their weapons)
– You start without a gun in the tutorial and before you even have time to look around and learn the controls, enemies already shoot at you.
– Half of the fence in the tutorial area doesn't have a collision
– I love the audience members with their creepy smiles; a pretty good choice to include them there watching you all kill each other
– If your FPS avatar is a capsule, disable its shadow (no one needs to see that)
– There are different weapons, but they don't feel that different; only by sound (related to the gunplay feel mentioned above)
– “green gun” plays audio only “from the right” when using headphones which is somewhat distracting
– after teleporting, your weapon changes
– I wasn't really sure who the boss was, no one seemed to look too different or be tougher
– I ended with a boss count of -3

Still, it's an impressive game with a lot of content, but it feels like a prototype rather than a game I'd love to return to and recommend to others.
Hope the tips above will help you if you'd like to continue with this project or when you start your next one. Good luck!

[Mincreft V3.7.10]

I couldn't get it to load at all after waiting ~5 minutes (Windows/Chrome, and then Edge).
Does it load properly for you at least?
If the loading is really that long, consider adding some sort of preloader with a progress bar, otherwise, you're bound to lose a lot of potential players before it even finishes initialization.

Alanthecat07 responds:

That has been fixed, thanks for the feedback

[Ezra's Art Quest]

The platforming in this game is fairly basic (so is the level design), but as an art project, it's quite unique and each level is very different – we go from hidden feathers, through chopping down a tree to collecting imp skins (!).

– I think the first level is the weakest one because there's no hint or visual indication as to where to look for feathers, so I almost thought I saw everything there is to this game, but I just needed to find more feathers – by methodically jumping over every accessible pixel of the screen. Not very fun.
– The shift to the tree is amazing, I would have never guessed the second level would be this after the first one.
– I would recommend not simply vanishing enemies when they are killed, that feels cheap. Ideally do some disappearing effect afterwards.
– The boss can be fought and defeated in the same way as the other imps (that's good, it's consistent and you can use what you learned before), although the one-hit-kill would be pretty annoying if the boss was harder (the fireballs are nearly impossible to dodge, so you learn to pogo on the boss’s head and expect when it turns)
– I would not end the game with the corals, but rather with the imps and the boss battle (for pacing reasons)

But it's really awesome we get to see the finished art project at the end in its full beauty.
Thanks – it's not the greatest platformer, but certainly an interesting and memorable one.

Edit: Updated the rating. Thanks for listening to feedback. :)

hhponygames responds:

OK thanks for the input, I changed a few things.