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I agree wholeheartedly with TakuaDE. The sounds used really do sound like someone's moaning and it's a great idea to wait for you to move until a level starts – it's annoying to be killed right after a level loads.

My complaint would be that I nearly quit the game because I couldn't figure out what to do – it took me a while to learn you have to hold & release a key. I've been trying to change colour to cyan and collect matching balls or hold a combination of buttons to create an opposite colour instead.
It's okay to not tell us everything – but the fun is in learning what to do in the game, not what the controls are. So as for instructions, I'd just update the instructions to something like "Arrow keys for movement / hold & release WASD to emit sound waves".

In the full game, boss battles sound cool, multiplayer might be fun, but if you aim to create hundreds of levels, make sure you add new kinds of enemies. That doesn't just mean new colours and new button to hold; you could invent more creative (and difficult) ways to dispatch an enemy. E.g. a red ball you can't kill by yourself, but you can lead the comet to kill it. Half-coloured ball which has to be turned white by holding a combination of buttons. Or you can make a level where you can't touch the walls, the walls have a different shape. Or obstacles, powerups etc. Whatever you think would fit in the game while adding something new every couple of levels.

Good luck. It was a pretty interesting and original game, albeit sometimes a bit frustrating.

Looking at your games, I think I recognise where they come from. :)
It's great to learn with a tutorial – but try to make the end result different. That's the point actually. You want to learn to create your own games, not to make something hundreds of others have done before. This is the result of a course section, but you made very few alterations (in all of your games actually). Ideally, after completing a course, you should look at the game and say: "I have the basic gameplay now, what could I add/change to make it a better game? To make it my own game? A *complete* game?".
There's plenty of things you could do. New kinds of bricks, more lives (!), powerups, score, different art etc. Be creative.

Tutorials are designed to teach you stuff a broad audience can put to use, so the end result is always kind of bland, short, core gameplay with little to no original elements. Even if other people don't recognise it's from a tutorial, they'll see your game is "good enough"; in other words "average", thus "3 stars".
If you want to be a game developer, especially indie, you need to sprinkle the game with something fresh, new, intriguing to captivate the players – which really just comes down to "your own ideas".

Just some advice. The games can be a good base… you simply need to incorporate more aspects you could call your own in them. Good luck in further learning.

EthanBusse responds:

I totally get and agree with you! I've been off the development path with school and work, but I've started making games without using tutorials / Udemy. :) So once I have some time off school, I'll finish the small original stuff!

Totally appreciate the support! Thanks!

This has to be the most surreal thing I have seen around here in a while.

Let's sum it up. You start off on a large, shiny green plate with a floating cylinder model nearby. There's nicely done water below it, but if you fall into it, the dark sky turns blue, waterline disappears and the ground looks like mountains. And if you fall off the mountains, you land on a "beach" (whose texture is watermarked) with walls around you, sun and vertical clouds texture in the distance. There's plenty of palm trees – one of which is burning – and every palm you walk by starts burning as well.

Wow. Kudos for originality, but aside of what I mentioned, there's really nothing else to do.

For a test, it's actually pretty good! Both the music and the bouncing sound is relaxing, the difficulty slowly increases, the environment changes (well, at least the platforms do).
Just in my resolution, if you play in the fullscreen mode, the interface becomes a bit messy. Even normally, the top text ("Record.") and the green crystal get cut in a half.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d545ff1012de1daab534117fb6a7d436
But beside that, great job!

POTEC responds:

Oh snx. Actually this is test job for game designer post,I made a couple of days. I just needed somewhere to download it to show.I did not expect that someone will see it. UI problems related to the fact that the game is designed for smartphones(android ver link below). So I think soon I will correct most of the problems and add features (skins shop for crystals) (sorry for my English)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/p4m8txuqvjklhlw/JB.apk?dl=0

For some reason, the game doesn't work for me… neither in Chrome nor in Edge.
All text in the game is missing and I can't shoot anything with the arrow (or perhaps I didn't figure out how, but it's hard with no instructions).
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2b5fab8aacd0fc54802c1b7b51fdf974
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/e8f277cf3bf6167681a147e1a170bdd1

FeudalCrest responds:

Okay, I'm working on the string issue right now. About the shooting problem, can you specify a bit more about it? Does the arrow not shoot at all? Thanks for the feedback by the way!

I think it could be good if you continue working on it, but so far it's just bare bones with some problems.

– The camera doesn't catch up with you which means you are constantly running close to the right edge of the screen. And you are so fast there's almost no time to react to possible danger. I guarantee you everybody who played this game for the first time died by running into the first zombie.
One time I even encountered a bug when a zombie supposedly killed me (the camera stopped following me), but I didn't die and could move around fine.
Also, there's no need to fill 50% of the screen with the ground - I'd much rather see what's above me.
– The controls for a platformer game have to be really good, but they feel a bit stiff.
For instance, you have no control of your jump. It's always the same arch. Take an example from Mario - there's some standard jump (going right and jumping), then a long jump (running right and jumping), but you can also slow down mid-air or even jump backwards a bit (jumping and pressing/holding left mid-air).
In this game you can't really make precise jumps, you often have to go back a bit to be able to jump to the exact spot you want. E.g. you jump forward more than up, so if there's a zombie right next to you, you die by ramming yourself into it.
– I don't know what the blue blob is, but if it's there to prevent you from going too much to the right (and almost always kill you), then there are better ways to do it (e.g. a huge rock in your way).
– Sometimes if you land on a zombie's head, it doesn't kill you, but as soon as it swipes it arms, you are dead. Either it should kill you right away, or not at all.
Also, the purple hair zombie is harmless.
– I don't think the idle animation is necessary. If you run somewhere and make a tiny pauses for the camera to catch up to you (or to wait for the zombie), the cat slowly reverts to it's idle state every time.
– If you are going for a spooky atmosphere, a rotating cat flying off the screen spoils it a bit (main character's death in a horror should be scary, not comedic).
– The game probably should restart by itself, not wait for you to press R.
– If a zombie falls from a ledge, it doesn't fall nearly as fast as the cat (→ inconsistent gravity).

Having said that, I can see the potential in this game. The spooky atmosphere is done quite right (also pretty well supported by the music), the cat's moving animation looks good and the snowing is a nice addition.

monkeypantyhose responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm gonna to work on all those points! Oh and that blue floating is a spell that the female zombie does(i know i know.... zombies don't do spells ), probably can't see it cause of the camera. And yes this is just skin and bones. I didn't wanna make a whole project just like this level and then have to implement the changes all over the place.. so this is just for feedback. Glad you liked the concept. And opening unity now....

The controls feel a bit unresponsive. Sometimes they won't react and this is the kind of game when a wasted time equals death. For example, try to make tiny squares with the snake, either you aren't going to stay at the same spot or you will go way off when an arrow key doesn't respond.
If it's not possible to make a turn at a moment (e.g. you are leaving your current tile), the snake should turn as soon as it becomes possible.

Also, since it's entirely a keyboard game, it should also be possible to restart it just using the keyboard. Here it returns you back to the preloader, you have to click "Play" and then also "Start" every time you die.

christianeugeniovgs responds:

Controls are a lot better now, im going to keep polishing them though.
you can press any key to start.

Well, at first I thought it's going to be just another plain idle clicker game, but very soon I was proven otherwise. This game actually requires your attention and was fun, especially in later stages when everything became a bit intense. The game's topic is also interesting, you don't see originality very often in this genre. By the way, the "Science !" popups were quite funny, too.
What I think you should improve though, is the graphical interface. In online games, you have just a couple of seconds to impress the player and both because this game has a slower start (before you get the knack of making money) and the GUI doesn't look that good, some people might just quit.

E.g. the menus are somewhat simple (plain text in semi-transparent boxes), try to decorate the buttons slightly and choose some kind of captivating background for the title screen. But the thing which quite bothers me, is the unnecessarily large log area which covers a part of the map (which is not used, but still) and the ships which sail below it all the time.
Also, in later stages you don't have the time to properly read the log, but messages pop up in high frequency. I'd suggest you to keep the text, but assign a specific colours or use icons. You can't possibly read all the messages, but because they are generic and repeat themselves, all you need is to register what kind of message it is through your lateral vision.
For example, if you saw some red text appear in the log, you'd immediately know either slave or soldier died without even reading it. Or something like "(red) ▼ Tobacco: By order of the king, prices of tobacco dropped by 20 %.", "(green) ▲Sugar: Fire in sugar factory.". Just try to make the messages recognisable at the first glance and, please, resize the oversized log area.

Just one thing that came to my mind now is that the ships sometimes bundle together and sail in one large group, so instead of constant, steady flow of goods, you get one big haul of goods which most probably won't fit in your warehouse and then several seconds of nothing. Maybe you ought to place the ships more evenly on the trade route.

In the end, there's also something like "You completed the game in 6 months, 46 years" which should probably be reversed (months aren't as important as years, which is why the years should come first).

But anyway, as I said, it's an interesting, quite enjoyable game; well done!

Sebbernery responds:

Hi !
Thank you very much for your review and your advices. It's very valuable for us, game developpers (especially for me as a beginner). I'll try to update the game later using your advices.

Thanks again !

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