Ralix's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[An axe (?)]

Looks alright, although I think it wouldn't be very well balanced if you tried to use it.
The wooden handle is too thin to support the large metal blade and it also doesn't go fully though it (nor through its centre of gravity), so most likely it would feel too heavy in your hands and the top part would break off after a few hits.

LeunamDs responds:

The truth so far I realize the error between the wood and the center of gravity. Thanks bro

[Lost in no man's land (IsolationComp)]

I like it! The idea is good and the backgrounds are very well done.
But I think the right side of the picture is a little bit too dark, making the flare – not the soldier – the main focus of the drawing. Also, the soldier's bent left arm doesn't seem completely right (proportionally).

In my opinion, red colour doesn't exactly portray loneliness… a colder colour might, or you could zoom out a bit to show the soldier kneeling on a vast, empty snow plain.
Of course, don't change anything now – I actually prefer it like this, but red is a warm, comforting colour which isn't good for expressing cold, emptiness, loneliness; if that's what you intended (it'd be similar if you drew him sitting next to a campfire).

P.S.: No need to upload "a proof" that you drew it (unless somebody actually expresses doubts) and the drawing process could be included in your description here – usually, you want to upload only finished works as separate art submissions.
On your art page, it's going to look more impressive if you have four good, finished works rather than four works and ten throwaway sketches/photos.

In5omioStudios responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I apreciate it a lot.
Previously I considered leaving the WIP images in the description (they are necessary to be qualified in the competition), but in the rules/guidelines, it only says that you must link to a WIP image. Since it only says "a link", I'm going in the safe way... I really don't want to be disqualified.
About the "proof" image, yeah... I already removed that. I reconsider it and realized that it isn't really necessary.
Regardless, I'll take you're advise on how to keep my portfolio "clean/impressive". Even though im not really interested to make it here on Newgrounds.

Again, thanks for the help!
Have a nice day/night!

[Tree Village]

This is truly extraordinary. I've also put it in my favourites. :)

beekart responds:

hehe thank you so much ^^